The Raging River

Apr 30, 2010
There once flowed rushing rapids, strong, fierce and tameless... But alas, it was hoarded and water now flows as a mere trickle... But the barriers weaken, and the river wishes to flow once again in all its glory.... But can it? Should it? Its flow unlike before may not be the same... It may flow along different meandering paths... It may break and finally flow as feeble streams, back along the barely feeble streams...... It may even pass into nothingness… Only time will tell.


  1. Anonymous said...:

    u are creative ...but you havent reached that stage at which a writer could make the reader swallow every word that he had seen,,ur writings lack something i cud tell... i just dont know how to word it down.

  1. Ay Jay said...:

    That's probably because this particular piece is veiled, I'll give you a buck if you figure it out. I believe in subliminal messages.